grimindigo | HMD/Feedback?

I've been playing Rosela for a couple weeks now and I think I finally have the confidence to ask for feeback on how I'm doing? This is my first time in a fandom roleplay period, much less playing a Rose, so I'm still somewhat shaky and insecure as to whether I'm doing things well/right, so I'd appreciate if you were nice or held back any overwhelmingly negative comments, but I would love constructive criticism or friendly suggestions on what I should improve on! I have some ideas of things I need to work on too, so yeah, just lemme know. :o)